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red/white/blue sentence
Earthquakes.
It was when I was seven. I was sleeping blissfully when suddenly an earthquake started to up rise. Confused, stressed, and half awake, cautiously continuing to sit up, then pushing my mother back and forth weakly. Her eyes opened slowly then after one look around she instantly became aware of what was happening. I had no clue what was going on but my mother sure did, and she didn't waste any time. She aggressively grabbed me by the arm and pulled me off the bed with her, then proceeded to run to each room to push every child out of the place that put them in a deep slumber. At this point my heart was beating as if I had been pushed out of a plane, and into the sky. Nothing was holding it back. We all rushed outside, and waited for it to stop, while hearing the awful sounds of belongings stumbling to the ground, crash, smash, swoosh. Then after all that time, my family and I were relieved. It was over.
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